Heres my advice!
You asked me to review these movies so here I go :)
Your animation was good but the graphics werent perfect :)
But! you added backrounds which was very smart.
It was funny but there was a big problem that you can fix pretty easily :)
That voice acting was not good at all :( but there is a very easy way to fix this :) You can watch some tutorials but Ill explain it right here! Heres wat I did. I make a set of mouthes like open, closed, looking like an o, etc etc... then I key them up the the music :)
So in a quick review I would say that you need to work on making a little better graphics(good detail already tho) and work on your voice acting. But hey NOBODY started out with the ability to make great flashes all we can do is try to get there(hell Im nowhere close)
ps. wow that was a big quick review.