Good Idea, Bad Application.
It was a good idea, but you need some touch up on your graphics and animation. The voice acting was good and the subtitles were nice, but you really could do better.
So, practice getting better on you graphics and animation.
ha, i know what you mean, Robotcow made the animation, i think he made the movie in a day. We are thinking about making it a little better with better sound effects
I loved it it was funny and your voice acting improved a little(tho I reviewed these both on the same day)
It was not only funny but the fact that you used something like that means you have courage :p(yeah I said courage) Good luck with your future flashes!
thanks a lot!!n_n
Heres my advice!
You asked me to review these movies so here I go :)
Your animation was good but the graphics werent perfect :)
But! you added backrounds which was very smart.
It was funny but there was a big problem that you can fix pretty easily :)
That voice acting was not good at all :( but there is a very easy way to fix this :) You can watch some tutorials but Ill explain it right here! Heres wat I did. I make a set of mouthes like open, closed, looking like an o, etc etc... then I key them up the the music :)
So in a quick review I would say that you need to work on making a little better graphics(good detail already tho) and work on your voice acting. But hey NOBODY started out with the ability to make great flashes all we can do is try to get there(hell Im nowhere close)
ps. wow that was a big quick review.
thanks for your rewiew n_n and thanks for the advice
It was good...
Except the fact that I knew all of it but good job! :)
I liked it but it seemed easier than before
Im the savior!
Man this game rocks and I "saved" it!
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